V2 Cold email feedback
Here's the next rendition of the copy for The Pickleball Passport. The emails are positioned to getting these pickleball club operators to book a 15 minute meeting with us to discuss a collaboration.
I've brought a reward on the other side of the meeting after a suggestion from last week which is "Early Insights Report" and "Destination Shortlist," which may still need to be more pronounced in the copy.
Ready to get this new campaign online.
Let me know what y'all think. Appreciate any feedback..
LFG this week!!🚀
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Ryan Magill
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