Hey, just checked it out. I'd suggest you don't use those colours for headlines. I'm guessing you wanted scroll stoppers, but it instead looks scammy. The VSL should do the heavy lifting in terms of selling the prospect, then the rest of the copy should validate the argument made in the VSL. You could've done more in terms of testimonials, maybe some visuals just to grab attention. And speaking about visuals, the sales page is 7 pages long, but there aren't any visuals, just text(excluding the VSL) Then there's the formatting. Don't play too much with font sizes, you have to be consistent throughout the sales page, and sizes as well as bolding should be determined by how bad you want them to see that particular section. Then at the end, the part where you show how valuable the program is $499+ , while it's going at $199 is not something I'd personally go with, especially since you followed by using scarcity for urgency. So in 1 page you said "BUY THIS, IT'S CHEAPER", then said "AND THERE'S ONLY FEW LEFT", it's like....brother. Don't try too much. Again, I really think you should checkout the actual content within the VSL to see how the copy surrounding it should support it. And DON'T PLAY AROUND WITH COLOURS. cheers ✌️

Would you mind sharing where you got an agency gig, LinkedIn?

@Eimantas M Ah, thanks

dropped some nuggets

@Sam Kay Shorten the time between feedback loops. 👍 You're welcome, G