will my design(after) get more conversions ?

according to feedback I received from this amazing community, I have worked on padding and colour Hope it's better than previous designs

It take me about 2 days in total; it's like 7 hours straight split nto those days. I do get inspired from the Gusten demo funnel. And here's the final result. Give me your feedback, and thank you so much for taking your time reading this

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