Paste your draft below and you’ll get it back with notes. Rough drafts welcome, that’s the point. Include: the sport, the school and the coach you’re writing to. What gets looked at: Is the coach’s name right, and is it the coach who recruits your position or region? Does the first line say who you are, your grad year and your position? Is the film link in the first three lines, and does it open without a login? Is it under 150 words? Is there one clear thing you’re asking for? Sent one this week? Say so, even if there’s no reply yet. Sending is the win. Replies come later and they come to people who sent more than one.