these are a couple shots I took filming any advice ?

Just posted this on insta and TikTok. This is my intro to my YouTube video coming out soon. Plz give feedback if you have any?

I see alot of people fail because they don’t have a story to tell or they have a story but dont know how to tell it to the best of there abilities

A man traveling the world, mastering his mind and body, and turning his life into art.

Im looking to build my personal brand and get better with my content creation