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Sep '24 •
How to outreach?
I'm going to outreach to someone and I'm not sure whether to be genuine and straight forward about business, or more complimenting and admirative, e.g. "Phenomenal strength" replying to their story. Could anyone please help? Many thanks.
1 like • Sep '24
Thanks guys I'm gonna outreach with your tips in mind
Sep '24 •
Fitness 2 piece HSO and PAVS copy review (be harsh!)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/190E_bu6CSxMIpAX0M8-Sn4mcio9kVuQns7c2-sfHAH0/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • Sep '24
Could anyone review this please?
1 like • Sep '24
Wow! I didn't think it would be good because I only started recently. Thanks for the feedback! I'm planning to outreach to this guy but I'm not sure when to. Should I start outreach now?
Sep '24 •
HERE'S ANOTHER COPY REVIEW IT
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RMu6mbvKBjBzIKiDdzdQH44LyFpD9BUBClXh4-d-Bpk/edit?usp=sharing rate it out of 10
2 likes • Sep '24
8.5/10 overall you copy is quite good, quite clear and straightforward but I think it lacks emotion and feels like the same tone until the cta
Sep '24 •
please review and rate it out of 10 relationship email
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w6ANAB09kJ1G3xw94UigjzZV_P18YZKfyCLGaQc_Iw4/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • Sep '24
Summary of my comments: 6.6/10 Overall not too shabby but It needs polishing, maybe use chatgpt on some bits
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