Hello Jon, I made my first grand slam offer video and I would likd to have a second opinion about what could be improved. Or maybe something is missing? I want to run it as an entry ad for my skool community, so feedback is highly appreciated. Best regards from sunny Germany, Raimund Bauer :-)

Hello Jon, Thanks for the feedback, I will create new video with a female and use Whisper and stock videos as a b-roll in the background. The current one is an AI clone from myself using my cloned voice with Descript. I just thought that my own voice and face would be more authentic, but I can split test that later on. By the way, the AI created wizards are part of the course material (I think it is called classroom on Skool). Thank you very much for taking the time for this personal feedback and best regards from sunny Germany, Raimund Bauer :-)