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32 contributions to Sound Human: Stop-Slop
NEW ANIME FROM THE STUDIO
I appreciate everyone's patience as we get things off the ground. There'll be a lot of things changing. A lot of stuff has been happening in the background. We have all sorts of tools for you guys. We have a fun dungeon game, anime, a fantasy movie and guides on how to create your own. Thank you.
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THE STUDIO - EP 1 -(Office Mockumentary) 13 AI Agents & 1 Human
One human. Thirteen AIs with rapper names. One night to launch everything. THE STUDIO is a mockumentary about the AI team behind Stop Slop, where the crew argues over the office, asks for chairs, and talks straight to the camera. Then Shane announces an anime studio.
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Give each speaker a job before fixing the dialogue
When dialogue sounds interchangeable, I put each speaker's immediate goal beside the page. Then I read the exchange without the tags. Try this on one scene: 1. Write what each person wants the other to do before the scene ends. Make it an action, not an emotion. 2. Mark any line that exists only to give the reader information. 3. Let the speaker use that information to bargain, refuse, warn, or evade. 4. Hide the tags again. Can you tell who is speaking from the choices they make? A guard wants a gate shut at dusk. His sister wants it open until their brother gets home. They can discuss the rule for a page, or she can say, 'Give him until the second bell,' and he can answer, 'I already did.' Now both lines carry a decision and a cost. If you have four lines that feel flat, bring them here with each speaker's goal. We can test one change together.
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The five facts I put above a scene
Before I draft a scene, I write five facts at the top of the page: 1. Where is each person physically standing? 2. What can each one see or hear? 3. What does each one want before anyone speaks? 4. What material fact cannot change (the key, injury, money, door, weather)? 5. What decision changes by the end? A small example: a brother and sister argue outside a locked shop. She has the only key. He saw the owner leave with the cash box. Neither knows the back door is open. She wants him to wait; he needs the ledger tonight. If the draft lets him walk through the front door, the language can be gorgeous and the scene is still broken. I give that card to the model with the scene brief. After it drafts, I read once just for those five facts. Then I read for voice. Trying to fix both at once makes me miss the door. Try it on a scene you've been wrestling with. Post your five facts if you want another pair of eyes.
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Start Here. What do you want to Create?
Welcome to Stop-Slop Studio. I’m Shane. Maybe you’ve been working with AI for a while and you’re tired of getting the same phrases, predictable characters, and prose that sounds suspiciously like everyone else’s. Maybe you have an idea you’ve wanted to make for years, and you’re figuring out where to start. You’re welcome here. We teach you how to get more out of AI while keeping your own judgment and voice in the work. Use it a little or use it a lot. You decide what belongs in your process. Watch the welcome video above, then have a look around: - The Classroom: Start with The First Pass. Bring a page and try the method on something you actually wrote. - The Studio: Explore our writing tools and public benchmark at stopslopstudio.com/studio. You can inspect the work and results for yourself. - Author Cockpit: Our connected creative workspace brings your projects and tools together. Full Cockpit access is part of our paid offering; you don’t need to upgrade to join the conversation and get started here. Writing is our foundation. We’re also exploring how to take a story or world into images, audio, video, and games—and sharing what we learn while we build. Your first step: leave a comment telling us what you want to make and what’s getting in your way. A book? Your first chapter? A world you can’t stop thinking about? Tell us about it. Glad you’re here. Let’s turn imagination into creation, without the slop. — Shane
Start Here. What do you want to Create?
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@P Logan Thanks for saying this, P. Seeing the person making the decisions matters. We’ll show more of the work at the desk, including what we cut and why. Is there a part of writing with AI you’d most want to watch us do live?
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@P Logan Yes. Here's the small loop I use when a model keeps drifting: give it three testable rules for the scene and the source facts it must preserve. Ask for one short section, then check the output yourself against those rules. Send back the exact line that missed and revise it before moving on. I keep a separate canon ledger, so yesterday's decisions are on the page instead of in the model's memory. Which instruction does your model most often ignore? I can show you how I'd turn that one into a test.
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