I don't know this choreo, so.... but I can say: Yeah, of course yes 🤩 the beginning is much better now✨😄, but I see some points where you can improve, to start: the movements of the hands in some parts, like: (0:17~0:20), I think they could be cleaner and more precise. I hope this helps 😄♥️ And, what is the name of the music? I want to see the original, and then, maybe I can help you better😄
Hey I'm Miha UK, I'm a Stay, (Straykids) and I want to improve my dance skills so I've been working on a few stretches. Let me know any tips you have for choreos to learn or your favourite kpop group! :D