Two schools of thought here. Learn to do it yourself first so you can give effective instructions or find someone whose style you like and have them edit them. I personally agree with school of thought one. As far someone who can edit photos, yes I know someone but rules of the forum specifically forbid advertising/promoting. Rule of thumb is to expect to pay $30/hour with each photo taking about 10 minutes to edit, so $3-$5 per photo.

You'll make more money and have an easier job starting an agency to manage OF accounts for women. It shares 90% of the work and skills but it's far more scalable than being a performer.

Picture 4 is the only one I like.

@Raul Moya All the photos look artificial and staged. Her smile also looks fake as if you are paying her to be there rather than her actually enjoying it. They aren't natural situations you'll find yourself being photographed. Picture 4 is relaxed enough that it appears to be plausibly authentic. Her smile, while still looking fake, isn't over the top.

I like it, I preferred the more zoomed out version though.

So, 1 and 5 are portrait shots. Generally you'll want to avoid those on your grid unless you are male model level of looks. 2 would be good but the light fixture washes everything out. 3 and 4 I like from a composition standpoint but they don't mean anything to me. It might be one of those "if you know you know" things where the location means something for those that know, but they don't speak to me as being trendy or exclusive. Nothing about those locations says "I want to be there." That said, if those are your first pictures go with 3 and 4 and take more pictures in that style.