Rough draft I know there’s grammar, punctuation etc but what do you think about the flow?
The air in Morgan’s bedroom felt thick with the residual hum of the lab, but as Toby unzipped his bag, the atmosphere shifted from the extraterrestrial back to something painfully human. He pulled out the leather-bound volume his father had sent—a field guide to British lepidoptera. The spine was creased from years of careful use. Toby’s fingers moved with a practiced, rhythmic speed, flicking through the plates of Swallowtails and Peacocks until the pages settled on the Red Admiral. In the lower-right corner of the cream-colored paper, a small, embossed seal caught the light. It was the crest of the Academy, but it looked different here—intertwined with a hand-drawn geometric flourish. "I think this might be important," Toby said, his voice barely a whisper as he stroked the page. Morgan leaned in, her eyes scanning the scientific notes. "Red Admirals are incredibly strong flyers," she said, her academic training kicking in. "My father told me they can travel hundreds of miles, even in the worst weather. They’re resilient." "Yes," Toby nodded, his gaze distant. "My dad told me they can reach as far as the Scottish Highlands. He said one had recently been found near Loch Ness. Very rare, that far north." Morgan’s breath hitched. The blood drained from her face as the fragments of her recurring dream began to lock together like gears. The vivid red-and-black wings she had seen in her sleep, the Highland grass, and the small, metallic glint beneath the butterfly’s thorax—it wasn't just a dream. It was a map. "Toby..." Morgan’s pulse quickened, a drumbeat in her ears. "The little metal mark. It’s exactly where your dad put it on this page." She looked closer at the illustration. There, tucked into the corner of the drawing, was a tiny, hand-inked symbol. It wasn't part of the original printing. It was a curved insignia, a metallic ink that shimmered with the same unnatural luster as the specimens in the lab. It matched the shape she had seen in the grass of her dreams with haunting precision.