Hello everyone, I recently finished a full-length screenplay and did a round of revisions. I'm looking for a beta reader to give me some thoughts on how good it is and what can be improved. In particular, since it's a little too short right now (72-pages), I'm curious what aspects of the characters were underexplored so that I can make them more engaging to bring it up to 90 pages. If anyone would be willing to give me a critique, tell me, and we can schedule a time. Thank you, ~Luca Toth