@Tomasz Zysnarski good email I left my comments read it Here's the important thing when you said : She starts liking you more. Why? Because people love to be listened to That's weak proof so you can instead say that with justification with value you can say that instead 👇🏼 When you start listening more than talking, something magical happens—your girlfriend starts liking you more. It’s not just a coincidence, it’s backed by psychology. Why? People crave to be heard. According to studies, when you actively listen, it signals that you value her thoughts and feelings. It makes her feel validated and important, Put this instead it's very powerful because your using authority

@Romario Lewis really good email keep up the great work You wrote for this client for free value or you have this client? And how you wrote for her like what's the steps you took to write free value email for real client because me myself I can write very good email but when it comes to write for real clients and get to their pages Instagram I get confused which thing I should write about how ?

@Zaid Haroon 6.5 / 10 I left my comments it's really gonna be helpful and the sl as they said make it.more clear and intriguing

@Yemi Joy good ; but the Language you're using very tough and not good at all and the second thing that you said you need a lot but the reality is that people Don't like to force tgem or telling them what they should do , they want proof of what you're saying

@Yemi Joy + the Sl can be more intriguing and make it short because we as a copywriters need to stand out there are 100 emails on readers inbox and we have to stand out

@Rivindu Pesara good but I don't get the Sl and at the end add more wtfm and testimonials qnd urgency and scarcity like what will Happen to my life If i Don't click the link and join

@Srinivash S it depends on your service and the company

@Sakin Ahasan access bro

@Angie Koguts good the Sl it's not intriguing and it's shows that free training but you didn't tell WTFM at the beginning the sl can be more intriguing like : your wanna give up,read this..? Or something like that and at the end you tell about the training Secondly you didn't tell sufficient information about the training what do I get from this tell the beneifets Overall the email 3.5 to 4.1/ 10