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Psalm 88 - My Soul is Full of Trouble
How do you endure suffering, when God gives no answer? This song attempts to capture the dark emotions and unsettling questions of such times. But even in the depths of despair, the lament exercises faith by continuing to cry out to God. 4/4, 65bpm Recording & lead sheet w/ lyrics: https://nextcloud.hutchens.cloud/s/qndGNGnJqTKJSKG Here's the outline: - Verse 1 - God, I am in great distress - Verse 2 - God, You have caused all my suffering - Chorus - God, I cry to You. How can any good come from this? - Verse 3 - God, if You don't save me, I will die - Verse 4 - God, why have you afflicted me?
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Psalm 18 setting
Here's something I've been working on. More in the devotional space, but I'm trying to see if there would be a way to adapt it to something a bit more singable. Would love any ideas! https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LIbVxyO-kuI
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Look Up - Opening / Call to Worship?
Hi, friends … This is a “song skeleton” … but I like the basics. Suggestions welcome. Update: I moved the key to D (I think) and made a few changes. New recording. Look Up VERSE 1: Look up and see the mountains And know that they shall stand. Consider their foundations Established by his hand. All things must work together As he ordains above. Unshakeable his purpose Unchangeable his love. TURN: So lift your wea - ry head … Look up. CHORUS: No throne … is higher than his No triumph … is greater than his No trouble … is too great for him Look up. VERSE 2: Look up from where you’ve fallen Behold where Jesus stands. Consider your salvation And see his nail-scarred hands. Your failures have been covered Completely by his blood. No one can separate you From his eternal love. TURN: So lift your wea - ry head … Look up.
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@Mike Somerville I am really starting to enjoy this song. I love the poetic language. I have two suggestions: 1. I think pronouns are fine to use once we’ve established who we are talking about (and then remind us once in a while). But currently, we don’t see God named until the second line of v2. I might even suggest making each line of the chorus more tangible: “No throne is higher than Christ / No triumph is greater than the cross / No trouble (trial?) is beyond His love (care? reach?)” or something along those lines. 2. It seems like the verse structure is 1) consider a truth about God, and 2) follow the truth to its application/conclusion. I think verses 1 and 3 could be strengthened by aligning the first and second sections of each on the same subject. For example, in v1, the first half considers God’s strength in creation, but the second half considers God’s sovereignty over details to accomplish his purposes. Both are good to meditate on, but don’t have the strongest connection to one another. I actually think v2 does this very well: first consider the length to which Christ went to secure your salvation, and then, because of this, know that you will never be separated from his love. Again, I think the individual sections are often excellent, but aligning them would really be powerful. Hope this makes sense and is an encouragement to you!
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You might also consider aligning the verses subjects to each of the chorus phrases. I.e. v1 considers the power and height of the throne of Christ, v2 the victory Christ accomplished, and v3 the love of Christ. (Perhaps in this model, you’d stop at 3 verses? Always hurts to cut content though!)
melody, sans lyrics
I have been experimenting with melodies lately. Here is one in A from a couple weeks ago that stuck with me, but I have not written any lyrics for. Link to score and recording at 82bpm. https://nextcloud.hutchens.cloud/s/iXHaQQtPdEQ9mCP
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I think it would be good to be specific in naming who we are talking about. I thought for a minute about making both v2&3 about Christ but here’s some alternate verse openers talking about the Father and the Son (this approach kinda loses the “See Him” motif, unfortunately): See God’s majesty on high God rules all things from on high See the Father’s majesty He who spoke the world to be See Christ come in love to earth Christ in love came down to earth Jesus came in love to earth See Jesus come down to earth Loved the poor and gave them mirth
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@Reid Parrott I am also enjoying this process. Thanks for all your patience with a novice like myself. You seem to have plenty of great songwriting experience :) I’ll definitely take time to sing through all these lyrics. So, your theory of the structure is the first two verses focus on the content of the psalm itself, and then the third verse provides a NT reflection of Jesus in the psalm? > I also don't think we necessarily need an entire verse on transcendence, since it's a major theme in the chorus and verse 1. Yes, I agree the chorus does feel lopsided in favor of transcendence, which would make the alternate structure of the verses not as effective. It’s one of the reasons I experimented with a line about the cross. I even thought about expanding with another line so we could keep everything, but I just couldn’t bring myself to edit the existing chorus. I just think it’s great as is. Less is always more, isn’t it? Deciding what to cut is such a challenger, at least for me. But that would give focus and help refine what remains.
On That Day - Congregational Song About Jesus Second Coming
Hello! @Sarah Steele and I have been working on this song about Jesus' second coming, based off of Malachi 4:1-3 and Zechariah 12. We would love your input on the lyrics more specifically, there are some spots where we can't find the right phrase. If you have any other input about the overall song that you think should be reworked please let us know. Thanks! VERSE 1 When you appear in glory, You will break open the skies. All of your foes will tremble, For the Victor has arrived! And when you appear in power, You will set creation free. All of the earth will worship And will shout its jubilee! // For the end of suffering --or-- And when you appear in power With a voice of roaring seas We will fall down and worship At the sound of your decree --or-- And when you appear in power With a face of blazing sun We will fall down and worship For the/our victory is won CHORUS On that day, we will see the Living Cornerstone. On that day, you will wipe our tears away. On that day, every knee will bow before your throne Oh, how we long, how we long — for that day! VERSE 2 When you appear with fire, You will rectify all wrong. Sin will be crushed forever, For your righteous hand is strong. And when you appear in splendor, Mighty angels by your side, You’ll bring us home to Heaven, For you’ve purified your bride. BRIDGE Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (We are waiting here for you.) Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (Come and make all things new.) Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (We are waiting here for you) Come, Lord Jesus, All: Jesus, come, oh come! FINAL CHORUS On that day, you will rise with healing in your wings On that day, the dead will rise in victory?? // we will stand before our King?? On that day, ever near, you fin’lly will appear. Oh, how we long, how we wait To see the dawn of that day When you will make all things new—on that day!
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RE: On that day, the dead will rise in victory?? // we will stand before our King?? The second option works better as is I think. The concern I have about the first option is all the dead do rise, but not all in victory. Daniel 12:2 “And many of those who sleep in the dust of the earth shall awake, some to everlasting life, and some to shame and everlasting contempt.” But I recognize that would be a lot of content to pack in just a phrase. Maybe you could bring the idea of kingship into it? On that day the dead will stand before their King It doesn’t really flow well as a follow up to rising with healing I guess. But salvation and judgment are often closely tied in the Bible so it might work.
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@Hannah Peters totally. Maybe something about our new role? Co-reigning with the King when He grants authority and dominion to the saints? On that day, we will rule beside the King Not sure that’s it either. Looking forward to what you end up with!
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