@Kimberly Stebbins the first third of the book is where a lot of people get stuck. It sounds like you have an information flow problem which is something I struggled with a lot too and was fortunate to get help on during a writing mentorship last year. The Best suggestion I can make is that when you make something that changes what needs to be said in the first third, go back right away and churn through to fix things, and then get back to progressing the story. And then when you're done this project do some practice with smaller projects or simpler genres on introducing the information the reader needs when they need it. Fantasy can be the hardest genre to get information flow right because it's almost entirely made up. So when I did my mentorship she had me start on other genres and write using places I know well as the setting, and then she gradually got me into the high fantasy genre I love writing by doing historical fiction, then modern fantasy, then new worlds fantasy