Jesse Hackett

@Tejas Vedere Good angle, CTA is alright, it just needs some improvements on flow. I recommend reading the email out loud to catch any inconsistencies, and then putting it through ChatGPT to fix punctuation and grammar.

Bharath Kumaran

Nov '24 •

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Review my copy

This is the copy written by me pls review it and share your thoughts and corrections in it THANKYOU! Rate it out of 1-10 https://docs.google.com/document/d/16NdzXbtz44v4et3gAB2hk3py74-o1ZIh/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=113327223130663245361&rtpof=true&sd=true You can also follow me on IG https://www.instagram.com/noman.leads?igsh=MTg5emJmbjlweHV3eQ==

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Jesse Hackett

0 likes • Nov '24

You've got the right ideas, you just need to work on execution. Fix the SL, cut the fluff, simplify your message, and revitalize the flow. This has the potential to be a pretty banger email with some adjustments 👀

Jesse Hackett

Oct '24 •

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Drop your copy here 👇

Have emails, landing pages, or ads? Drop em here for a quick review. Come on, don't be shy...

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Jesse Hackett

1 like • Oct '24

@Vasa Mitrovic Not sure if you wrote this email for a prospect or not, but I highly recommend you look for businesses and prospects to write emails for, so you can practice writing in their brand voice (super important)

Jesse Hackett

0 likes • Oct '24

@Salman Th Just gave you some insights.