After months of overthinking, doubting and tweaking, I finally wrote my 8th email. I need your honest feedback. Does it connect, convert and actually make someone want to register? Be brutally honest- I can take it😉 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aSSd66YHSTKA41Boj3h0TGjn_2_KCtsNQ2mjr4PdKYs/edit?usp=drivesdk

Hey Everyone ! 👋 Hope everybody is fine. 🙂 I have a question related to outreaching on Instagram. I recently outreached to 5 to 6 persons by commenting on their posts and also by replying to their stories. They all replied and liked my comment but didn't see my message inbox. And when 1 of the 6 replied , she was not directly herself. It was her sales assistant who were actually replying to me. I wanted to give her free value but then I thought It's useless to send free value email to her because that is deal by her assistant , not her . So she will not gonna know me. What should I do nowww??? @Everyone Can Anyobody help me in that??

I wrote this email and want it to be as persuasive as possible. Could you tell me: Does the hook grab attention? Is it engaging throughout? Any improvements? @Everyone [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SWrVxGt5d9HqM1lBXp2jrNeBDb5W4cCNICmEG60wC-k/edit?usp=drivesdk] Thanks a ton—happy to return the favor! 🙏

Hey! I got a message from a potential prospect after asking him if he has an email list going. What should I say next? (Any improvements and criticisms to the message already sent would be appreciated as well)

Whats up guys Drop your copy and I'll brutally review it for you within 24 hours