👉 The Copy: Here's a fitness sales page headline from a 4D student. Let's take a look at what they made: - For skinny weak men, with low confidence - How you can gain 1kg of muscle per month. With The Build To Last Protocol 🧬 - Without force-feeding yourself to grow. Now before I tear up this headline to shreds, if you want regular 1-on-1 reviews just for you feel free to send me a direct message here on Skool with "SHRED" Let's continue... 👉 The Review: Ok, first of all, get that emoji out of the headline lmao. Second, let's start with the first line: "For skinny weak men with low confidence" ... NOBODY wants to identify themselves subconciously as skinny, weak, and low confidence. So most likely that's gonna hurt you. Instead, talk about something that won't hurt their ego that they are struggling with. Ex. hard-gainers, packing on muscle, etc. Now the main headline: "How you can gain 1kg of muscle per month. With The Build To Last Protocol" - What is the "Build to last protocol"??? That sounds like a B.S. unique mechanism, or a program name. I wouldn't include that in this specific headline. - Change from "How you" to "How I" or "How they" - Add some more spice. Now the last bit: "Without force-feeding yourself to grow" That works, it's not as big of a deal as the other parts of the headline, but there's still room for improvement. Here's the updated headline 👇 - Struggling to fill out your frame? - How I Pack On 1 KG Of Muscle Per Month With A "Skinny" Protocol - Sustainably bulk up without adding fat (even if you're a hard-gainer) See ya'll next week!

Wrote this promo email for Thedanharrison on IG: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15CZGrnAEtvcR0QiqmynkasYVJJ-gndn0Y17uDgXar5s/edit?usp=drivesdk

I made this chart in order to give to my clients before our work begins,.I want to know, have I asked the right questions? and should I add or substract any questions? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LfB-fkuM6RNZdGN-OwMcfxo-Zx03F0BZBPivWP6rVdE/edit?usp=drivesdk

Aim: to be honest and give REAL advice but not overly negative.

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