Although this is a simple dance you do need to move your legs, it looks like there is a lack of movement there. As well as your arms look sloppy and we can't really see much. But continue practicing
This is my cover of the song Up by Karina. I know I kinda messed up a part so don't mind it. I just want to know if there are other things I should improve, is it giving idol energy, etc..
When it's saying "I'mma run it" I would say but more energy when you walking back, like move with your whole body (I'm not sure if you would understand sorry😭) Most of your moves are clean, BUT I think you could add in some power and sharpness in some parts. I feel like you were thinking about the move when you went down, so I would say when you do that move don't think about it too much and add a little head tilt. Sometimes your upperbody is stiff. And you have a bit of disconnected pauses Otherwise you did actually awesome. I think if you auditioned for JYP like a survival show he could probably pick you because you have potential
I know its messy at the end, but what should i polish and with this, how many % do you think that i have of passing the first round? (Ignore my face in the start)
I'm not tryna be rude nor mean. BUT I would say you have a 10% chance of passing 1. I feel like your moves are forced, they don't flow, like there's stiffness, you lack body control, some of your moves are incomplete I wish you best of luck in your training