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6 Feb(was written on the 6
so many years, I hid away. uresponsible and free I farmed out the essential beneath a dome for 3. Nah— a dome of four., Me, I, her— and she Four worlds, one mind Parallel In time collective …are we.
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I checked out some of the active members and oh boy everyone is way older and experienced and it shows in thier writings, i hope to reach similar level one day. Here's one confessional piece that shows my writing style and structure nicely in short length. I'll be happy to have some reviews. {No name yet} How did the man who caged the parrot felt? Did he ever realised he had caged her? Did he never thought to himself "I shall release it?" Did he loved her? Yet kept her caged? Is it because deep down he knew, he could never make her stay Just with the care he could muster? Did he loved so much yet couldn't love at all?
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lol did you just call us old? funny 😂 I found your piece interesting, you had me at the first line because of the use of the word felt. It made me question what I was reading and how I was hearing it. Felt – while grammatically incorrect, it lands heavy, weighted. Intertional (if it was intentional and not a typo) I also liked the bit Did he love her? yet kept her caged? I 100% think line spacing is really important as it shows a writer where to breathe. Keep going, make writing a habit. It's brave to ask for feedback. but @Gabriel Xantalos is brillent at it.
Start Ugly
This is for the ones who are just starting, coming back or are in a moment where the blank page sits and waits: For the days the words don’t come. Sit with silence like an old friend. Start ugly. Begin broken. Finish gently. Let it go. And when the world asks what you made... say only this: “I made a way back to myself"
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This real steadiness in this, It feels like something you can return to on the days that writing feels hard.
4 Feb
I started life a little late, A story I've carried with me. I couldn't read till I was eight. wore masks, built to protect me. My scattered brain, with jumbled words. The pictures moved so fast, I tried to catch what most would see, but stumbled in the dark.
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Thank you for such thoughtful feedback, I appreciate the care you took with it. You picked up exactly what I was trying to convey. My style of writing leans towards controlled fragments, allowing space to breathe so the emotion can settle where it’s needed. It means a lot that the scattered rhythm felt aligned with the experience behind the poem. I also find it fascinating how meanings can live not just in the words, but in the spaces between. Thank you again… I’m excited about getting into the practice of day the writing ✍️
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@Marco Avila Beautiful, thank-you
5 Feb
There's this cafe I used to go to– I lived just down the road. With mismatched, gray and salmon tiles. For years, it felt like home. I left the suburb a while ago, thinking that it was best. The fence that borders our little home, surrounded by my ex. The yellow door that kept us safe, windows of painted glass. I walked through shattered glass.
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Hannah Cardamone
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@hannah-cardamone-4983
I write to make sense of the noise. Fragments, poems, and unfinished thoughts — shared as they are, not polished into something else.

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Joined Feb 1, 2026