@Keny Arjenis Hey Keny, look there are a couple of things I don't really like about your Mail, but it does NOT mean that its bad! First things first: I'm missing a catchy hook. The first lines of your Mail are the most important ones, which means if you don't catch people early on its unlikely they keep reading. 2: I think the transitions between the individual areas (Hook, Problem, Solution) could be a lot smoother. 3: Call to Action: No one will care abt the link if you don't make the link attractive. --> Don't say "this program will guide you" say something like "This will help you to become the person you always wanted to be" You get my points? Next step: Don't give up, open your google doc right now and Improve yourself, try using cgpt to help yourself with grammar mistake. Keep Grinding. I believe in you.