What do you think about? Technique, feeling, touche, and others... Thanks and enjoy! 🤘

What can you tell me about my technique? About my right hand, left hand, and the coordination between the two... What mistakes am I making, and how do you think I can improve? Ibanez Grg170dx Vox ToneLab LE

I uploaded the recording to Room 335. I didn't take many shots.I uploaded the recording from Room 335. I didn't get many takes. I'm waiting for your comments. My next target is Point It Up, again from Carlton..