Yeah, this is really about refining what she’s already doing well, not changing her style. I’d keep it encouraging but give her that analogy lesson: Your energy is infectious! 😂👏🏽 It definitely comes across that you know and love what you do. Great lighting, you fill the camera well, and I loved the teaching format of asking the question and then giving a clear, technical answer. My only feedback would be to speed up the pause before the answer a little. I understand what you were going for, but social media moves fast. The other thing I’d work on is analogies. Just because you understand the technical explanation doesn’t always mean the audience will. Think “dirt and clouds”—meet people where they are, then take them higher. Maybe it’s layers of a cake, food, pets, whatever feels natural to you. The better the analogy, the easier it is for people to understand and connect with what you’re teaching. You’re already doing a lot right. Now it’s just about continuing to tweak and refine it! 🔥

Great advice, bro! I understood what you were saying in Spanish, and the idea of building a family with your clients, taking care of them, and allowing those relationships to help grow your clientele is a really strong message. My feedback is still confidence. You’ve been in this industry for 18 years, so I know you believe what you’re saying and you’ve lived it. Now we need to feel that on camera. If the audience doesn’t feel like you’re confident in the message, it can make them question whether you believe it—even when you do. Keep getting those reps in, bro. As your confidence on camera grows and your delivery starts matching your experience, I think your message is going to be really powerful. 👏🏽

Great story! You had a clear beginning, middle, and end, and the story itself was really powerful. My only feedback would be to bring us into the moment a little more by telling us how you felt as the story unfolded. How did you feel when you found out he had cancer? What were you thinking when his grandmother finally said yes? Those emotions help us experience the story with you. Also, don’t be afraid to bring the other characters to life a little bit. When you quote the grandmother, maybe change your voice slightly or imitate the way she said it. You don’t have to be an impersonator 😂 but it helps break up the story and makes us feel like we were there. Again, great story and great job telling it! Just add a little more of you and your emotions into those moments. 👏🏽

Great energy! You did a really good job following the assignment and answering every question clearly. I can definitely see the educator in you 😂👏🏽 My only feedback would be to bring more of your personal stories into your answers. You mentioned being here to serve teenagers and also being a mother and grandmother. That’s powerful! Maybe tie in something you experienced raising your own children that explains why you feel called to help teenagers. Don’t be afraid to go on a little rabbit trail, tell the story, and then bring it back full circle. That’s where people will really start to connect with you. Great job! 🙌🏽