Small WIP I'd like to ask for help on
I have a work in progress of one of my non human characters, Kestrel, in his day to day. It was a prompt i set for myself at the beginning of the month, but nobody spoke to me about it so i just didn't touch it after the initial few paragraphs. Let me know how I can improve on this and add, while not straying from his character and the idea I had (day in the life with an injured paw) For reference, hes a dragon, he works in the millitary on the ground team, and hes apart of a trio of friends (his other friends being Mayday and Callie.) ... With a ruffle of wings and a small annoyed grumble, Kestrel stood to his talons, ears drooped. He wobbled as he got up from his wooden bed. "**Euugh. Ow.**" With trouble, the skywing staggered out of bed, to lean on the wall, glancing at his hand. He must've slept on it wrong. Forehead creasing, he sighed, looking around the barracks. There was a session hosted for Shield Talons today, and he was probably gonna miss it because of a dumb injury. He scowled, before shifting and fixing his posture, shaking it off. If he recalled correctly, there were no sessions Mayday would be attending— archery was off work, and there was no all-regiment sessions as far as he knew. ...He could go ask him out for a day off. Was Callie free, he wondered? Even if, he didnt want to miss a session. He could power through; he had for most of his childhood after all. A frown crossed his face as he thought of his childhood. An often worry, that somehow it would come back one day and bite him in the tail. He sighed, shaking his head slightly and swishing his tail as he stared around the empty brackets. —