🔥 Weekly Challenge Submission — Harhuza Prologue
What’s up everyone — Dennis here. For this week’s writing challenge, I chose “A scene that reveals who your character really is.” This moment comes from the prologue of my book Legend of Harhuza — the introduction to my main character before the story begins. It sets the tone for who he was, who he became, and why his return matters. Here it is: I was a god once. Before the stars were born, before the angels carved Heaven’s gates into existence, I was Harhuza—the first light to pierce the infinite void. The Creator’s greatest work. But like all creations, I was flawed. I did not bow. I did not obey. While others sang praises to the Creator, I saw the cracks in His design. I saw His weakness, His fear of what we could become. And when I spoke my truth, when I sought to reshape existence in my image, He cast me down. Lucifer, the pretender, called himself Prince of Darkness. But I was the true King. When I walked the flames of Hell, they bent to me. When I spoke, the legions trembled. But Lucifer—ever the schemer, ever the snake—sought my throne. For a moment, I allowed myself arrogance. I believed myself untouchable. In that moment, Lucifer betrayed me. I was not cast into the fires of Hell. No. My punishment was far worse. I was torn from existence, my essence ripped from its divine form and bound to an object—a fragment of gold no larger than a coin. An amulet. For millennia, I drifted in the abyss. Powerless. Voiceless. Forgotten. But mortals have a way of stumbling where they should not. In 1899, I felt the first touch of a human hand in over ten thousand years. I felt the pulse of life, the warmth of blood. And I knew I would rise again. Would love your thoughts. What hits you, what confuses you, what stands out. Let’s keep building each other up. 💪🔥✍️