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How do we continue in the confusion of racism? Why is it not laid out plainly—on the table, in the open—with the proverbial curtain pulled back on its flawed foundation? It is blatant. Obvious. As simple as 1+1=2.And yet somehow, it is treated as if it is not. The idea that one human is superior to another simply because of how they were born is not strength—it is a glaring display of weakness. How has this persisted, so strongly, for so long? Why is there not a collective spotlight shining on the simple truth: What kind of person stands on pillars that have nothing to do with who they are or what they’ve done? How long will we, as a society, entertain this fabrication of power? Here is the irony—the coup de grâce: Those who cling to racial superiority often possess real, earned strengths. They may be brilliant strategists, devoted parents, loyal friends, exceptional athletes—capable, accomplished individuals. And yet, instead of standing on what they have built, they reach for what they were handed at birth. True accomplishment—earned skill, cultivated character—naturally creates pride inspires others. It elevates communities. It builds something real. In contrast, superiority based on race, sex, or inherited status produces only division—an atmosphere thick with defensiveness, hostility, and emptiness. To validate these ideologies—to give weight to racism, sexism, or inherited elitism—is as absurd as the beliefs themselves. They are not just flawed; they are fundamentally disconnected from truth. We have, in many ways, been conditioned into accepting a false reality—one reinforced over generations. History has shown us where such distortions can lead, when unchecked and normalized. The consequences are not abstract. They are visible in the fractures of our societies, in the conflicts we face, in the systems that fail because they are built on faulty premises. A world that insists 2+2=9 does not function. A civilization built on false equations cannot solve its own problems.
Haiku
I'm new at Haiku. I usually write rhyme , rhythm poetry, but I've been trying other poetry styles.
Haiku
1 like • Feb 16
Love it
Introduction
Hi- I'm Dawn and new to this community. I love writing Poetry.
0 likes • Feb 4
Hi Dawn would love to hear some of your poetry we have the same name it inspires me to maybe write a poem about meeting people of the same name thanks for joining look forward to seeing your work
Struggle to success
Not too long ago, my life was on hard mode. I was working as a cleaner in a restaurant, earning $600 a month. Always tired. Always stressed. And honestly I couldn’t see a way out. One day, I swallowed my pride and asked my sister’s friend a simple question: How are you making it? She told me she runs an online store and introduced me to the person who helped her set everything up. At first, I didn’t believe it would work for me. But I followed the steps anyway. Fast forward to today 👇 I now make no less than $28,000 every month and last month I even hit $30k. From cleaning floors to running my own online store. All because someone showed me the right direction. If you’re tired of struggling and want to know what the online store is or how I did it, 👉 comment “INFO” or send me a message on my WhatsApp +14315074155
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Info
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I have toyed with a Shopify store simply have not been able to get it exactly off the ground would love some info thank you for reaching out
Welcome
Wanted to say welcome other new members. I shared a piece this morning in the working it has more yet that was what I felt like the beginning was done I thought I'd share a piece and work and then the bits and pieces as I put it together like a process if anybody would like to join this that would be wonderful and everybody has a great day and talk to you soon big hugs always
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