I’d work in the phrase “here’s what selling weed taught me about scaling businesses” Maybe because of Uk, I’ve never heard of a dime baggie so that could be a bit niche and lose people straight up In relation to the original the comparison isn’t quite as stark, the niche is tighter so harder to get huge appeal. I’d keep the “take care of your customers” realisation for later, and tell the story of riding home paranoid beforehand so there’s some tension, because if you think about it, after you say “the lesson is simple, take care of your customers” I’ve basically got the vibe of the video and don’t feel the need to stay

Yessir, be careful when using those photos, the aspect ratio changes and we end up with black bars on the top and bottom of the screen, and occasionally the macro counter covers the actual food, try to match your framing of each picture so the food doesnt change position each pic

definitely push that fruitarian angle dude, it's quite unique, can work to draw in some more attention