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30 contributions to Unpublishable
Jun 16 • 
Sandbox
Come play in the sandbox
General discussion about anything, preferably writing related. Remember we don't want AI bunfights taking over our community. So avoid that topic, as well as politics and religion. Anything else goes.
1 like • Jun 20
@Daisy Liesel yep!
0 likes • 13h
@Timor Birdman 𓃵 I dont think there's anything too dark for the group. As long as you include trigger warnings at the start :-)
New classroom content
Including a fun little game, "What Word?" Share a screenshot of your best score if you like :-) https://www.skool.com/unpublishable-1951/classroom
1 like • 8d
@Lisa Karasek nice to hear :-)
Random recollection (writing advice received)
Rather obnoxiously, way back when I wrote my first novella (A sci-fi by the name of "Defying Gravity"), I emailed it to a well known Australian author. They had zero reason to reply at all, let alone with advice. And yet they did. The advice was.... "Swap your first two chapters around. Your first chapter is boring, because I'm not invested in any characters. Your second chapter, with a character in peril, is a much better start, and a reader is more likely to make it through your info-dump afterwards." 🙂
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Here's the original opening to "Defying Gravity". I've just been re-reading the novella and cringing. I'm almost tempted to un-publish it and re-write the whole thing. That might be an interesting project. There's parts that I still love, and I believe the story is quite unique, but it could be written a lot better . hmm... I wish I had more time :-( --- Triton One Outpost It’s dark out near the edge of the solar system. The sun is still the brightest star, but its light is not the burning yellow as seen from Earth. It’s a far-off white speck, offering no heat or comfort, except as a navigation point if a ship needed to return home to the inner system. It’s also very lonely out on the edge. By the year 2198 humanity has only just established a single presence this far out. “Triton One” was the optimistic name given to the station clinging to the icy surface of its namesake: the largest moon of Neptune. There’s a type of person drawn to that isolation. The irony is that it’s not the type of person anyone would want to be stuck inside a tin can with for years. But Triton One is a bit more than a tin can. A black carbon-fibre dome stretched tightly over a crater, its edges anchored into Triton’s surface by melting the ice and allowing it to refreeze over the anchor points. Dotted around the outside of the dome, the various science experiment modules and communication relays known as “pingers” called out to the Kuiper belt and beyond, to interstellar space. For the romantic at heart, Triton One persevered with humanity’s attempt to contact other life. For the militaristic at heart, it provided an early warning system if that life turned out to be hostile. For Lana Sumeti, the Triton One station provided the biggest delivery contract she’d ever taken on. The onboard AI brought her ship, the Liu Xin, into a tight orbit around the large moon. It had been many months since leaving the Delta V station in Saturn's orbit and the comforting buzz of the inner system. As each month went by, the various stations and waypoints slipped out of range and the lag time between transmissions made it impossible to have a smooth conversation with another human.
Unpublishable to published?
I was very happy to get the news that one of my short stories, a horror western (an experiment I was trying) was finally accepted after over a dozen rejections. It's not a big payday in any way (a few bucks) but it felt good having someone like this story that so many had turned down.
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Congrats! 🙂
No Rain, No Rainbow
No, they're not a cult. And yes, I'm a member. lol.
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Davi Mai
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I write transgressive fiction across multiple genres. Have self-published a handful of novellas and one novel, "Alice Ate the Rabbit".

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