If you’re writing a novel and it’s not in “I” form, but still feels close and emotional—you’re probably writing in third-person limited. Here’s the easiest way to understand it: 🎥 Think of your story like a camera …but the camera is locked inside one character’s experience at a time You’re not saying “I”… but everything the reader sees is filtered through that character. ❌ Weak / distant: Sarah entered the room. Gary noticed the broken altar, but she didn’t. 👉 This jumps between minds (called head-hopping) ✅ Strong / immersive: Sarah stepped into the room and froze. The altar had been knocked sideways, incense crushed into the floor. The smell still lingered. Someone had been praying here. 👉 Everything is what she sees, feels, and assumes 🔥 Golden rule: If your character doesn’t know it—you don’t say it. 💡 Pro tip: You can switch perspectives… just do it by scene or chapter, not mid-scene. If you want your writing to feel: ✔ emotional ✔ immersive ✔ cinematic Third-person limited is your best friend. Ask yourself while writing: 👉 “Whose scene is this—and how would they experience it?”

That's beautiful Meghan and so, so true! He will finish what He started in you, amen?

My own journey to writing with a deeper purpose: I used to be a very angry Atheist until I saw Yeshua with my own eyes 👀 in 2014. Since then, I took five long years to read from Genesis to Revelation. I didn't move on to the next chapter or book until I had understanding from Holy Spirit. I kept a journal of all my questions and answers He gave me. The book of Daniel revealed much historical context and the book of Revelation was very interesting to say the least. I remember crying out to God in the shower 🚿, asking Him to help me understand Revelation; the seals, the trumpets, the bowls, etc. Finally, after having gone through Seminary and growing my own charity for the homeless, He thought I was ready to start writing a trilogy filled with romance, drama, adventure, and suspense centered around down to Earth, real characters to bring understanding to the world. It's more realistic and scripturally accurate than any other end times series. You fall in love with the characters as they wrestle with what's happening, the existence of God, the problem of evil, various religions, and so much more. All that while the world is ending and they fight to survive not just the elements, but gangs of ill intentioned survivors. It's less military and more relational. My trilogy isn't just entertainment, it will change your life. How about you? Do you feel like your writing has a deeper purpose?

Thanks Megan, that cover is beautiful. Do you use Photoshop? Would love to see some tips from you about editing.

@Meghan Quinn I'm still in the writing stage. Do you have any practical tips for editing?