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9 contributions to Kathy L Murphy's Big Book Love
Video Trailers
I have a question for those with more experience than me! I have a friend who writes dystopian novels and she has had video trailers made for all 11 of her published and successful books. My question is, has anyone in this group invested in these trailers and did they seem to be helpful for your book sales?
3 likes • Mar 6
@That’s a really great question. Book trailers can actually be very helpful, but it depends on how they’re used and where they’re shared. From what I’ve seen working with authors, trailers tend to work best as a visibility and engagement tool rather than a direct sales tool. A well-done trailer can quickly communicate the mood, genre, and central conflict of the book in a way that grabs attention—especially on platforms like social media, author websites, newsletters, and even on a book’s sales page. For genres like dystopian, fantasy, thriller, or sci-fi, trailers often perform particularly well because those stories already have strong visual elements—world-building, tension, and atmosphere—which translate nicely into short cinematic previews. Where they really shine is in helping potential readers feel the tone of the story before they even read the description. Think of it almost like a movie preview for your book. It can spark curiosity and make someone want to learn more. I’ve worked with a few authors on book trailers, and what usually makes them effective is focusing on three things:• creating a strong hook in the first few seconds• highlighting the central conflict or mystery• ending with a memorable line or question that makes the viewer curious about the story When those elements are done well and the trailer is used strategically in marketing, it can definitely help attract attention and build reader interest. If anyone here is curious about how trailers are structured or what goes into making one effective for a book launch or promotion, I’m always happy to share insights or examples. It’s a really interesting part of book marketing that more authors are starting to explore.
Why Most Manuscripts Don’t Fail at Grammar — They Fail at Structure
I’ve been studying modern developmental editing frameworks lately, and I’ve realized something powerful: most books don’t struggle because of bad writing… they struggle because of weak story architecture. Over the past few weeks, I’ve been diving deep into structural editing — not just line edits or grammar fixes, but the underlying frameworks that shape strong narratives. What stood out to me is how many successful stories follow certain structural principles, even when the author doesn’t consciously realize it. For example, the Three-Act Structure breaks a story into setup, confrontation, and resolution making sure tension builds properly and the climax actually earns its place. Freytag’s Pyramid focuses on rising action and emotional escalation, ensuring the turning point truly shifts the narrative. The Fichtean Curve removes slow exposition and jumps straight into conflict which is why it works so well in thrillers and fast-paced fiction. The Seven-Point Story Structure strengthens midpoints and turning points, especially helpful when a story feels like it “sags” in the middle. The Hero’s Journey emphasizes transformation not just what happens externally, but how the protagonist changes internally. And Dan Harmon’s Story Circle simplifies that transformation into a clean emotional loop: comfort, disruption, struggle, change. What I’ve learned is this: strong books aren’t just written — they’re architected. When pacing feels off, when the climax feels flat, when readers say “something’s missing,” it’s often a structural issue rather than a sentence-level problem. It’s been fascinating to see how applying these frameworks can clarify theme, deepen character arcs, and strengthen emotional payoff without altering the author’s voice. Curious how many of you consciously think about structure when drafting? Or do you write intuitively and revise later?
2 likes • Mar 4
@M. Damien Suriel Thank you — I really appreciate that. And I completely agree with you. Most writers, especially early on, don’t begin with structure in mind. Writing intuitively is actually very natural because storytelling is something we absorb from books and films long before we ever study craft. What I’ve found is that intuition often already follows structure — we just aren’t consciously labeling it. The frameworks tend to become most useful during revision. They help us step back and diagnose pacing issues, weak midpoints, unclear stakes, or a climax that doesn’t fully land. So I don’t see structure as something that replaces intuition. I see it more as a refinement tool something that strengthens what the writer has already created organically. Honestly, writing intuitively first and revising structurally later is a very strong approach. I’m curious when you revise, do you tend to focus more on tightening pacing, deepening character arcs, or strengthening the ending?
1 like • Mar 6
@Lynette Simmons That actually makes a lot of sense, and honestly a lot of great writers work exactly that way. Writing intuitively first and then shaping the structure during revision is a very natural process. In many cases, the structure is already there it just becomes clearer when you step back and look at the arc afterward. For humorous memoir, the Hero’s Journey can work surprisingly well because memoir is often about transformation who you were at the beginning versus who you become after the experience. Even when the tone is light or funny, that inner change still gives the story emotional weight. What I often find when looking at memoir manuscripts is that the structure is already present, but sometimes the turning points, stakes, or emotional shifts just need a little strengthening so the journey feels even more satisfying to the reader. If you ever want a second set of eyes on one of your stories or chapters, I’d genuinely enjoy taking a look and helping you see how the narrative arc is working within it. Memoir especially humorous memoir can be really fun to shape structurally.
BOOK TRAILER
Is your book stuck… no sales, no buzz, no real attention? You poured your heart into writing it. You edited, formatted, published and then silence. No excitement. No momentum. Just a link sitting there, waiting to be noticed. That’s where a book trailer changes everything. A book trailer gives your story a voice before a reader ever turns the first page. Through visuals, music, and carefully chosen lines, it creates emotion. It sparks curiosity. It makes people feel something. And when people feel, they click. They share. They buy. In a fast-moving digital world, attention is currency. A strong book trailer doesn’t just promote your book it positions it. It tells readers, “This story matters.” Your book isn’t stuck. It just needs to be seen.
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Book Cover
Let’s talk about book covers, authors 📚 Sometimes books don’t sell not because the story is bad, but because the cover doesn’t attract buyers on Amazon. Your cover is the first impression if it doesn’t catch attention, readers will scroll past. How are you designing your cover?Does it match your genre?Does it make people curious enough to click? As an independent editor on Fiverr, I help authors bring out the best in their manuscripts by refining their tone and also designing befitting, catchy covers that truly represent their story no scams, just quality work. Let’s make your book stand out inside and out.
Book Cover
1 like • Feb 16
@Fred Oliver First, thank you for sharing this. If I’m being honest with you gently, but clearly; the cover isn’t bad. It’s actually very clear in what it’s trying to say. Within seconds, I know I’m looking at a religious thriller. The Vatican. Fire-lit skies. A stern, shadowed face. Gold serif typography. It absolutely signals “Dan Brown–inspired conspiracy.” There’s no confusion about genre. But here’s the deeper issue. It tells me everything immediately. There’s no question. No hesitation. No quiet curiosity. The cover announces: Ancient evil. Vatican. Darkness. Awakening. It’s bold, dramatic, and loud. And sometimes, especially in today’s thriller market, loud works against you. Right now the tone leans more toward supernatural horror than intellectual conspiracy. The heavy red-orange palette creates a sense of apocalypse and demonic intensity. That intense face hovering above the Vatican feels aggressive rather than mysterious. It pushes the reader instead of pulling them in. Dan Brown’s covers, and modern religious thrillers that perform well, often feel restrained. Cool tones. Deep blues. Stone grays. Architectural details half-hidden in shadow. A symbol. A fragment. A coded detail. They suggest there’s something beneath the surface rather than shouting that something evil has awakened. The phrase “An Ancient Evil Awakens” is especially direct. It removes intrigue. Readers of this genre love puzzles. They want to feel like they’re uncovering something forbidden. When the cover spells it out, some of that psychological hook disappears. There’s also something slightly dated about the composition. The dramatic face overlay was very common in thrillers about ten years ago. Today’s market trends lean more minimalist and cerebral. Less fire. More tension. You mentioned wondering if the darkness is “too obvious.” I think you’re sensing something correctly. The story sounds layered, archaeology, Temple Mount, buried tablets, Vatican secrets, modern parallels. That’s rich. But the cover currently emphasizes raw darkness over layered intelligence.
1 like • Feb 18
@Joy Davis This looks nice, It comes out from the perfect creative partner. It looks awesome
✨ Another 5-Star Amazon Review! ✨
✨ Another 5-Star Amazon Review! ✨ I’m so excited to share this amazing 5-star verified review for Girl Get Comfy: A 30 Day Devotional to Get Comfy with Jesus by Christy L. Hornberger 🤍 This project was completed through my daughter’s Fiverr account, where I had the privilege of professionally editing the manuscript, formatting it for both paperback and Kindle, and designing the front and back cover. Seeing it now published on Amazon and receiving such a beautiful review is incredibly rewarding! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ “BUY & READ THIS BOOK, YOU WON’T REGRET IT!!” — Verified Amazon Review When you trust me with your manuscript, I promise excellence, attention to detail, and a design that truly represents your message. Your book deserves to shine ✨
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0 likes • Feb 18
@Kathy L. Murphy Thank you Kathy
1 like • Feb 18
@M. Damien Suriel Thank you Damien
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