I'm a scriptwriter and AI copywriter building my freelance business. Would love quick feedback on my help statement before I start outreach. "I help business coaches who sell high-ticket programs and are getting views but not buyers book 10-20 qualified sales calls in 60 days using a done-for-you Script System built around your voice." 3 quick questions: 1. Is it immediately clear what I do? 2. Does the outcome (10-20 sales calls in 60 days) feel believable and specific? 3. Does anything feel vague or confusing? Honest feedback only no sugarcoating needed 🙏