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The art of war/artistry:
In The Art of War, Sun Tzu emphasizes that picking your battles is the foundation of strategy, with the ultimate goal of winning without fighting. True mastery, according to Sun Tzu, lies in recognizing which conflicts are worth engaging in and which should be avoided, as not every dispute warrants the expenditure of energy and resources. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vabnZ9-ex7o It can be overwhelming life/artistry. You can't win all the battles unless you pick which you choose to engage in. Which script etc
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From the Elation of the First Draft to self-induced Punishment.
We build something in isolation, and then we proudly present it, and it’s a levelling experience. It can feel like a direct attack on us down to the marrow of our bones. Terry Pratchett famously said, "The first draft is just you telling yourself the story." This permits you to be "messy." Shannon Hale views a first draft as "shovelling sand into a box so that later, I can build castles." Toy Story 3 took three years before Michael Arndt got the green light. Paul Thomas Anderson likens screenwriting to ironing: you move forward a bit, then go back and smooth things out. I don’t recall who said it, but they spoke about reframing how we look at a first draft and to stop seeing the rewrite as punishment but as showing we are intentional, in other words, professional rather than amateur. Does that make sense to you, and how would you amplify this?
From the Elation of the First Draft to self-induced Punishment.
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@Elliot Evans I made my first 'legitimist' trailer for my first movie 4 months after it was released. It now has 1/7th as many views as the movie itself.
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@Elliot Evans it's a phase. Like Gatorade sport drinks, to use a metaphor. Tastes great! Supposed to be good for you too! Eventually people will realize they're drinking the high fructose corn syrup of cinema. It may take a decade so...as Mr. Stem says just be agnostic about it. I've witnessed the youngest generation becoming more aware of the detriments of doom scrolling.
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When I was 16 I was in the honors society in HS and taking college writing. I worked for weeks on an essay regarding the socioeconomic policies of Scandinavia. Maybe the teacher thought I was a commie I don't know, but he traumatized me. He basically said to the class that this is total garbage with no redeeming value. I went to his house for a honor's society holiday party. I asked him if I fixed his electric train if he'd give me a B so I could go to the University. He agreed. It wasn't until I took a writing class at a local college 6 years after my entrance to the University of Washington that I got my first A on a legitimate essay. Timid? yes. Afraid? It's not whether or if you're afraid in my opinion. It's how you deal with that energy. Thanks @Chad Desrochers and community for being you.
Tuesday and Friday Live Premium Coaching Calls
Let’s go, people! These premium calls are critical. In my opinion, they are a mixture of revealing the magic of our creativity and ideas that flourished out of the universe unexpectedly, but we caught them because we showed up to the page. The other side for me is it’s like triage. Something in my story is bleeding out, and the table read is where I identify it and get some solutions from the community and David Stem. As David has said, “A good table read doesn’t just improve dialogue — it reveals the *soul gaps* in the story.” Bring your pages and let David Stem and the community help work on your story. Please reach out to people to cast your pages in advance. It helps to keep the call moving. Here’s the link to where you put up your casting and your pages. Here’s the link for the Tuesday, April 7th Premium Coach Call. Here’s the link for the Friday, April 10th Premium Coach Call.
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Ladies and Gentlemen boys and girls. I ought to have a script ready for a table read as soon as the 10th. It's brief. The story is amazing, fabulous, unquestionably great. but... The characters talk a bit stiff. I'm going to change that editorially. Hopefully the community can help hold my hand and shove me in the right direction concerning doing that myself.
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Ahead of the 10th, I’d ask that you take a few minutes to watch a short 2:30 second, accompanying video clip. If you can, please have captions enabled—only about half of the voice acting is complete, so the captions carry key dialogue and context. The clip demonstrates how the machinima voice acting process comes together—showing raw visuals first, followed by the edited dialogue—so you have a clearer sense of how the final performance is constructed. We may then move into a brief table read of the full 4-page script, focused on character voice and differentiation rather than plot clarity. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2Gc-eNtP8M Thank you for the consideration.
The diplomatic leader that puts the mission first:
Hi, friends and acquaintances. For those of you in similar roles, I have a situation as a leader. I've been a leader for as long as I can remember yet, I still have (those situations), that as my friend says: "refrain from having your talent on tenterhooks". I have two voice actors in mind. One of them I'm fairly certain is better than the other. The other one's wife I need to lock in as the female protagonist... I'd like to listen to both performances though. Question: How do I diplomatically say, "I'm not going to choose either of you until I examine your performances?"
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@Lena Lieuvin That's a great question and statement, Lena. The other voice actor I've been working with has been working with me for 5 years. Everyone loves his baritone and diction but as you said I'm not 100 percent sold on his delivery emotional. I'm direct. As you may have witnessed I just 'say it', instead of using social graces when "I" speak. I can recognize genius, I'm just barely smart enough to do so. Long story short I know which will past tense be best. I cannot say at this juncture which. Instead of me saying I need to stress test both of your performances before I decide who gets the part, (what I mean), I have to say it 'nice': @Lena Lieuvin I will make the decisions I think are best for the project, and that there's nothing personal to any of the decisions, "I have some tough choices to make and need just a little more time to finalize my next steps"? @Thia Markson
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GPT helped me write this in MY words. I'm casting the male lead of Sunbreak. I'd like to bring in one other actor alongside you so I may listen to you both. After listening to your wife's work all I have to say is she's amazing. I hope this lands well. Let me know your thoughts, please.
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Hi, nice to meet you all. I average 25 hours/week using my video production skills and tools to create machinima. Real cinema in real'' virtual worlds

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