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Being brutal is good
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13PM9BZ3yWxymy5V11_lhS8peruPOFzyFyGuYSpf7dGc/edit?usp=sharing
Being brutal is good
2 likes • Jul 1
People would not want 3 videos for 1 problem. You should start with something like "The Hip Is the Victim, Not the Villain." It would be better. This is probably a welcome email, right? So, if you want to give them a cta at the end of a video and make another email for a course or a program that teaches you how to make your hip feel better. Other than that, it was great
2 likes • Jul 1
@Zoha H me too bro but Tyson thought me to critique people's copy as it will help me so glad I could help this is my first day btw
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Mohammad Raza
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Digital Marketer who specializes in Email Marketing

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