If you’re working on an offer and feel unsure whether it’s the right one to commit to, post it below.
I’ll review offers in public and help tighten:
- What you’re actually selling
- The promise vs what the market likely hears
- Where clarity or trust breaks
- The single change that would increase certainty
This is not copywriting. This is not funnel advice. This is offer diagnosis.
HOW TO POST YOUR OFFER
Please include only the following:
Offer name:
Who it’s for:
Webpage or google doc:
Offer details
I’ll respond in-thread so everyone can learn.
If you’ve ever thought, “This should be working better than it is,” post your offer below.