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First pages of Sailing On
The first 6 pages of my first and biggest project. This is a very rough draft, so let me know what you think of this beginning sequence. My biggest pain points are doing time jumps effectively and making the audience understand why the son loves his father so much when his father is notoriously hated by others. And doing it in a short amount of time.
I called the main character Nathan five years ago because my parents almost named me that, not knowing I'd have a film teacher also named Nathan, so I thought that was a funny coincidence, haha.
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First pages of Sailing On
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