Mar 27 β’ General discussion
πOur Poem of the Week Winner @Zoraa Writesπ
This is beautiful work,
You didnβt try to force anything here and thatβs exactly why it works. The whole poem feels like a slow exhaleβ¦ like something heavy finally loosening its grip.
βCourage is not a shout,
itβs just the simple turning
of a key in a stubborn lock.β
That line right thereβ¦ thatβs the spine of the poem. Simple, clear, and it hits hard without trying to.
I also love how you stayed consistent with the tone nothing feels rushed or out of place. The imagery is soft but intentional. βAcceptance tastes like clean rainβ is one of those lines that just lingers.
If I had to push you a little further? Iβd say maybe tighten one or two spots just to sharpen the impact but honestly, thatβs refinement, not correction.
This feels honest. And honesty always wins.
Really strong piece. π
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πOur Poem of the Week Winner @Zoraa Writesπ
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