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Indelicate
Chance of rain
Chance of rain, yeah?
Chance of going completely insane
Why do you ignore me when
The battle wounds start to bleed
What kind of woman ought to understand
What kind of woman do YOU need
I am certainly obtunded by your
Unsurprisingly remote lack of love
The words, ways, that have been feeding me have stopped their funding
Deliberate
You are
Grossly inconsiderate
Please break my limbs, maybe- wait
Yes
The passion only sings
When you’ve abandoned me so succinctly
Let me take the tincture, let me
Rest assured, you can try to pinch her
But the real story has taken over
And
I’m not the wolf you want to recover
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