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I am becoming weak day by day
Losing hope in every way
Searching for a reason to live
Hoping someone can give
I look around at the world
Seems like chaos unfurled
People consumed by their greed
Forgetting what we really need
I want someone to say
"Focus on your goals, don't stray"
But all I see is disappointment
From people, society, and the environment
I feel like I've lost my way
Confused in everything, day by day
Did I forget my purpose, my track?
Or did I let all hope slip through the crack?
I long for a guiding light
To lead me through this endless night
To show me that there's still a chance
To find my way, to regain my stance
I search for a reason to hope
To find the strength to cope
With all the struggles and strife
That threaten to consume my life
I remember the dreams I had
The ones that made me feel so glad
But now they seem so far away
Lost in the darkness of each passing day
I need someone to remind me
That I am strong, that I can be
The person I once dreamed to be
If only I could see
So I'll keep searching, day by day
Hoping that someone will say
"Focus on your goals, don't stray"
And show me the light to find my way
I am becoming weak day by day
But I refuse to let hope slip away
I'll hold on tight, I'll keep the faith
And find the strength to embrace each day.
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