Mar 30 • Writing Craft→ Tips & More
“My First Short Film Script — Be Brutally Honest”
Hey everyone 👋
I wanted to share something a bit personal with this community. This is a short film script I’ve been working on. It’s actually based on a joke between me and a friend that slowly turned into a story.
This is one of my first serious works, and to be honest, I haven’t had the chance to get feedback from experienced or professional people yet. So I genuinely don’t know if it’s good, bad, or somewhere in between — and that’s exactly why I’m posting it here.
Also, a quick note: the script was originally written in Georgian🇬🇪 and then translated into English. Because of that, I’m aware that some of the dialogue might not sound fully natural or authentic — but the core idea and emotion are what I really wanted to share.
I’d really appreciate any honest feedback — whether it’s about the story, characters, pacing, or dialogue. Don’t hold back.
Thanks in advance 🙏
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“My First Short Film Script — Be Brutally Honest”
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