Your About Page Sucks (Probably) 🫣

You've read your About page draft so many times the words have stopped meaning anything. 👀

At this point it probably feels like it sucks, and you can't say why. That's your own eyes quitting on it. You can't tell what's clear anymore, because you already know what you meant.

The kit writes the About page out for you, and the version that goes live gets better when someone who isn't you reads it first.

So paste your draft in the comments (or just the opening paragraph if the whole thing feels like too much), and we'll give you line notes before you publish. Nobody's draft gets roasted, even if you think it sucks.

If you want a format, use this:

Who it's for: [one line]

Opening line: [paste it]

The part I'm unsure about: [one line]

Your one-line job: paste the first sentence of your About page below. ✂️

If you had to lose three words from it, which three would you cut, and what does the sentence say once they're gone?

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Your About Page Sucks (Probably) 🫣