Roast my first VSL! 😐 · Roast & Promote 🔥📢

🔥

Roast my first VSL! 😐

I posted my community a couple days ago, and implemented some of the advice I recieved. Such as, actually saying who I am and making my infographics a little less busy and overwhelming. I also hopped on the VSL call today with

@Ivan Ivanov

and it inspired me to finally pull the trigger and get the VSL for my about page done. It's probably not my final version, but I just wanted to see how you guys felt about the flow. Have I effectively expressed:

1) Who we help

2) What they struggle with

3) Our clear solution

4) Their next steps

I really appreciate anyone who takes the time to check it out!

https://www.skool.com/elektrikal-skool-6941/about

21 comments