This project is still a work in progress.I’m aware there is a lot of room for improvement, and I can clearly see many mistakes throughout the video — in pacing, continuity, and execution.
That said, this piece represents an important learning step for me. Each iteration helps me better understand storytelling, timing, and emotional clarity. I’m sharing this not as a finished product, but as part of the process.
Feedback and constructive criticism are more than welcome.