2 wonderful writings already! Please everyone read them and my feedback so you can all better yourselves ! First writing task🤩
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Topic: Education & Technology
Some people believe that online learning is more effective than traditional classroom learning, while others think the opposite is true.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
  • Write at least 250 words
  • Spend about 40 minutes
  • Use a clear structure:
  • Introduction
  • Body Paragraph 1 (View 1)
  • Body Paragraph 2 (View 2)
  • Opinion (can be in body or separate paragraph)
  • Conclusion
Introduction:Paraphrase the question + state what you will do
Body 1:Explain why online learning is effective→ give example
Body 2:Explain why classroom learning is better→ give example
Opinion:State your view clearly (which is better and why)
Conclusion:Summarise your main idea
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Ellen Chamilothoris
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2 wonderful writings already! Please everyone read them and my feedback so you can all better yourselves ! First writing task🤩
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