Feb 8 • General discussion
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Hi Can and all the other Gs, how are you?
I am testing new creatives for my client. They sell motorcycle tracking device.(GPS)
Now, we are focusing on getting potential businesses (motorcycle accessories shops, etc.) to sell our product.
Here is the ad, it is Turkish but I'll translate down there:
"
MOTORCYCLE ACCESSORY SHOPS!
How many people came to your shop last month and asked for GPS?
So, do you sell motorcycle tracking devices?
How much more profit would you make if you were selling GPS?
Increase your sales with GPSGOPRO remote fuel cut-off tracking devices!
Fill out the form below to get more information about dealership.
LET US CONTACT YOU!
"
In this ad copy my thought process was:
I'll ask them questions about something they missed, and make those people really think:
"Yeah, these guys are right, people came to me and asked for GPS, and I don't have any! I'd make a ton of more sales if I were selling GPS."
Have been running this ad for nearly 2 weeks with a daily budget of 300₺ (around $10)
Cost Per Lead is 60₺ (around $2)
I think those results are decent but wondering what do you think about it and how can I improve?
Thanks.
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