Oct '25 • General discussion
Need help with my email's
Never sent a single email in my life and I'm wondering what would perform better.
For now I made two options and I need help to choose which one and if you could add some things that I can either remove or add to make this email perform better.
A little side note, all of my email list is just emails (no name's 🥲)
Unfortunately, I didn't capture all of their names.
Don't have the budget to pay for a tool yet.
And my ideal client profile is coaches that have a strong presence on Instagram, and I'm automating their DMs with AI.
Things to note, I only work with one client per month and I have a 15-day guarantee (unconditional)
So, straight to the point, what would you think that would perform better, Email 1 or 2?
number 1:
Subject: Your DM graveyard
Body:
Hey,
Quick question what's the oldest unread DM from a potential client sitting in your inbox?
For most coaches, it's a lead graveyard in there.
Full of promising conversations that got buried by the flood of
"how much is it?" messages.
I help coaches automatically find the gems and never let a good lead be buried again.
Mind if I show you how that works?
number 2:
Subject: This weekend's DMs
Body:
Hey,
Just thinking about the flood of DMs that will pile up this weekend.
Your inbox is a leaky bucket, isn't it?
A ton of leads pour in the top, but the qualified ones are quietly dripping out the bottom while you're busy.
I help coaches plug those leaks, making sure those valuable clients don't slip through.
Would seeing a fix for that be helpful before Monday rolls around?
I think they look pretty good to me.
I used AI to help me a little bit with those.
If anyone got some feedback, I'd be more than happy to hear it!!!
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