Can AD copy influence your click through rate all?

Not sure if your allowed to do this - what do you guys think? (Right is the new version)

Hey guys, so since around Mid September, I switched from primarily IG DMs to coldcalls, in terms of my outreach system. When I used to DM, my show rate was a solid 60%. when I manually booked them, I would send them a thank you VSL and reminders for 24h, 1h, 10m before on email and phone, as well as a follow on Instagram. Since switching to coldcalls, I have booked over 20 meetings. And only around 5 have actually showed (25%) The actions I’ve taken so far to improve this is sending a personalised written email with testimonials and freebie incentive, after booking instead of just thank you VSL . And I’ve made sure to be consistent with calling them an hour before every booking (sometimes I forget this) I have another 5 meetings upcoming next week and I believe it’s that which is the problem. I have no choice but to book people far out (5-7 days away, sometimes 10) because I work a full time job, and my availability with the prospect always clashes. Even though this is technically out of control, it still really annoys me. Any suggestions guys @Uncle Jimmy Mitchell

Hey guys Jacob here How much should I ask for 1 employee? (I´ll run hiring ads and idk what is the correct pricing) Its just manual labor so nothing that requires degree

Getting this objection quite a lot now, and I am not really sure how should I respond to it cos there is advertising involved but my whole service isn´t only abt advertising, Im doing appointment setting and also take upfront fees from the lead itself Do you have any suggestions on how I should react when this objection comes on a cold call?