Here is some notes to think of 1. Does you about page say what you do, who you are, and your credibility, do you talk about the pain points of the customer you are serving. 2. Do you have a hook or do you do the about page as an expansion of the header. That what I do see image below. 3. Is your about page written correctly no spelling error proper grammar as well as good writing 4. Does it move people from cold I don't know you to warm I trust you and I want to move forward. 5. Don't sell your service there sell something easy like reaching out to you. Clicking the link to learn more or moving one step in the right direction. This is your CTA you need a CTA. Any questions you have about pages -> HERE Want me to write your about page message me ABOUT and I'll do it. If you need more help with this, Only can do it for 10 people, message me ABOUT '