I agree with everything that has been discussed so far. One main point that stands out to me is the lack of evidence regarding the engagement with posts. Just saying that I’m keeping up with someone’s posts doesn’t necessarily mean that I actually am. To clearly demonstrate my engagement, I would include a reference to a specific post that caught my attention. For example, she could have said, "I really enjoyed your post on quick tips and tricks for a first-round interview with a recruiter. Since I haven’t had my first interview yet, it provided me with a solid foundation of questions to ask myself before starting the process." Additionally, it would have been beneficial to ask a question related to that post, such as, "Are there any other key talking points I should review before starting the interview process?" This not only references the original post but also encourages a direct response to something already highlighted, making it more appealing for you to reply since it pertains specifically to you.